diff --git a/fwupd.changes b/fwupd.changes
index fcb207e..188a52e 100644
--- a/fwupd.changes
+++ b/fwupd.changes
@@ -32,6 +32,12 @@ Thu Sep 13 09:23:44 UTC 2018 - Nico Kruber <nico.kruber@gmail.com>
     - Rewrite the unifying plugin to use the new daemon-provided functionality
     - Show a time estimate on the progressbar after an update has started
 
+-------------------------------------------------------------------
+Mon Sep 10 11:45:07 UTC 2018 - Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
+
+- Use noun phrase for summary. Trim request for comments from
+  description.
+
 -------------------------------------------------------------------
 Fri Sep  7 21:35:47 UTC 2018 - Nico Kruber <nico.kruber@gmail.com>
 
diff --git a/fwupd.spec b/fwupd.spec
index 67124b3..dbbea3c 100644
--- a/fwupd.spec
+++ b/fwupd.spec
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 Name:           fwupd
 Version:        1.1.2
 Release:        0
-Summary:        Allow session software to update device firmware
+Summary:        Device firmware updater daemon
 License:        GPL-2.0-or-later AND LGPL-2.1-or-later
 Group:          System/Management
 URL:            https://fwupd.org/
@@ -83,10 +83,8 @@ BuildRequires:  pkgconfig(libsmbios_c) >= 2.3.0
 %endif
 
 %description
-fwupd is a simple daemon to allow session software to update device firmware on
-your local machine. It's designed for desktops, but this project is probably
-quite interesting for phones, tablets and server farms, so I'd be really happy
-if this gets used on other non-desktop hardware.
+fwupd is a daemon to allows session software to update device firmware on
+the local machine.
 
 You can either use a GUI software manager like GNOME Software to view and apply
 updates, the command line tool or the system D-Bus interface directly.
@@ -97,20 +95,16 @@ Group:          System/Libraries
 Requires:       %{name} >= %{version}
 
 %description -n libfwupd2
-fwupd is a simple daemon to allow session software to update device firmware on
-your local machine. It's designed for desktops, but this project is probably
-quite interesting for phones, tablets and server farms, so I'd be really happy
-if this gets used on other non-desktop hardware.
+fwupd is a daemon to allows session software to update device firmware on
+the local machine.
 
 %package -n typelib-1_0-Fwupd-2_0
 Summary:        GObject-introspection bindings for libfwupd
 Group:          System/Libraries
 
 %description -n typelib-1_0-Fwupd-2_0
-fwupd is a simple daemon to allow session software to update device firmware on
-your local machine. It's designed for desktops, but this project is probably
-quite interesting for phones, tablets and server farms, so I'd be really happy
-if this gets used on other non-desktop hardware.
+fwupd is a daemon to allows session software to update device firmware on
+the local machine.
 
 %package -n dfu-tool
 Summary:        Generic tool Device Firmware Upgrade (DFU) tool
@@ -125,10 +119,8 @@ Group:          Development/Languages/C and C++
 Requires:       libfwupd2 = %{version}
 
 %description devel
-fwupd is a simple daemon to allow session software to update device firmware on
-your local machine. It's designed for desktops, but this project is probably
-quite interesting for phones, tablets and server farms, so I'd be really happy
-if this gets used on other non-desktop hardware.
+fwupd is a daemon to allows session software to update device firmware on
+the local machine.
 
 %lang_package