diff --git a/homeshick.spec b/homeshick.spec
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--- a/homeshick.spec
+++ b/homeshick.spec
@@ -46,15 +46,18 @@ BuildRequires:  fish
 %endif
 
 %description
-Homeshick is a tool for users to manage configuration files, also known as
-dotfiles. A set of dotfiles is stored in a git repository.  Standard git
-push/pull commands are used to synchronize a dotfile repository between user
-accounts and/or machines.  Multiple git repositories can be managed
-independently. For example, this allows installing large external frameworks
-(such as oh-my-zsh, or a multitude of emacs or vim plugins) alongside personal
-dotfiles without clutter.
+In Unix, configuration files are king.  Tailoring tools to suit your needs
+through configuration can be empowering.  An immense number of hours is spent
+on getting these adjustments just right, but once you leave the confines of
+your own computer, these local optimizations are left behind.
 
-See also: https://dotfiles.github.io/
+Homeshick is a tool for users to manage configuration files, also known as
+dotfiles. It leverages Git repositories to store and version dotfiles, and to
+synchronize dotfile repositories between accounts and/or machines. 
+
+For example, this allows installing large external frameworks (such as
+oh-my-zsh, or a multitude of emacs or vim plugins) found on sites like
+https://dotfiles.github.io/ alongside personal dotfiles without clutter.
 
 Packaged revision: %{git_sha1}