Accepting request 532228 from home:jengelh:branches:network:cluster

- Trim redundant wording in descriptions.

OBS-URL: https://build.opensuse.org/request/show/532228
OBS-URL: https://build.opensuse.org/package/show/network:cluster/slurm?expand=0&rev=24

slurm.changes

@@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
+-------------------------------------------------------------------
+Fri Oct  6 13:53:08 UTC 2017 - jengelh@inai.de
+
+- Trim redundant wording in descriptions.
+
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 Wed Sep 27 11:08:29 UTC 2017 - jjolly@suse.com
 

slurm.spec

@@ -112,18 +112,17 @@ Obsoletes:      slurm-sched-wiki < %{version}
 Obsoletes:      slurmdb-direct < %{version} 
 
 %description
-SLURM is an open source, fault-tolerant, and highly
+SLURM is a fault-tolerant scalable cluster management and job
-scalable cluster management and job scheduling system for Linux
+scheduling system for Linux clusters containing up to 65,536 nodes.
-clusters containing up to 65,536 nodes. Components include machine
+Components include machine status, partition management, job
-status, partition management, job management, scheduling and
+management, scheduling and accounting modules.
-accounting modules.
 
 %package doc
 Summary:        Documentation for SLURM
 Group:          Documentation/HTML
 
 %description doc
-Documentation (html) for the SLURM cluster managment software.
+Documentation (HTML) for the SLURM cluster managment software.
 
 %package -n perl-slurm
 Summary:        Perl API to SLURM
@@ -136,16 +135,16 @@ Requires:       perl = %{perl_version}
 %endif
 
 %description -n perl-slurm
-Perl API package for SLURM. This package includes the perl API to provide a
+This package includes the Perl API to provide an interface to SLURM
-helpful interface to SLURM through Perl.
+through Perl.
 
 %package -n %{libslurm}
-Summary:        Libraries for slurm
+Summary:        Libraries for SLURM
 Group:          System/Libraries
 
 %description -n %{libslurm}
 This package contains the library needed to run programs dynamically linked
-with slurm.
+with SLURM.
 
 
 %package devel
@@ -155,8 +154,7 @@ Requires:       %{libslurm} = %{version}
 Requires:       slurm = %{version}
 
 %description devel
-Development package for SLURM. This package includes the header files
+This package includes the header files for the SLURM API.
-and libraries for the SLURM API.
 
 
 %package auth-none
@@ -178,7 +176,7 @@ Obsoletes:      slurm-auth-munge < %{version}
 Provides:       slurm-auth-munge = %{version}
 
 %description munge
-This package contains the SLURM authentication module for Chris Dunlap''s Munge.
+This package contains the SLURM authentication module for Chris Dunlap's Munge.
 
 %package sview
 Summary:        SLURM graphical interface
@@ -210,7 +208,7 @@ Summary:        Slurm SQL support
 Group:          Productivity/Clustering/Computing
 
 %description sql
-Slurm SQL support. Contains interfaces to MySQL.
+Contains interfaces to MySQL for use by SLURM.
 
 
 %package plugins
@@ -221,21 +219,21 @@ Group:          Productivity/Clustering/Computing
 This package contains the SLURM plugins (loadable shared objects)
 
 %package torque
-Summary:        Torque/PBS wrappers for transitition from Torque/PBS to SLURM
+Summary:        Wrappers for transitition from Torque/PBS to SLURM
 Group:          Productivity/Clustering/Computing
 Requires:       perl-slurm = %{version}
 Provides:       torque-client
 
 %description torque
-Torque wrapper scripts used for helping migrate from Torque/PBS to SLURM.
+Wrapper scripts for aiding migration from Torque/PBS to SLURM.
 
 %package openlava
-Summary:        Openlava/LSF wrappers for transitition from OpenLava/LSF to Slurm
+Summary:        Wrappers for transitition from OpenLava/LSF to Slurm
 Group:          Productivity/Clustering/Computing
 Requires:       perl-slurm = %{version}
 
 %description openlava
-OpenLava wrapper scripts used for helping migrate from OpenLava/LSF to Slurm
+Wrapper scripts for aiding migration from OpenLava/LSF to Slurm
 
 %package seff
 Summary:        Mail tool that includes job statistics in user notification email
@@ -243,8 +241,8 @@ Group:          Productivity/Clustering/Computing
 Requires:       perl-slurm = %{version}
 
 %description seff
-Mail program used directly by the Slurm daemons. On completion of a job,
+Mail program used directly by the SLURM daemons. On completion of a job,
-wait for it''s accounting information to be available and include that
+it waits for accounting information to be available and includes that
 information in the email body.
 
 
@@ -259,7 +257,7 @@ Requires:       perl = %{perl_version}
 %endif
 
 %description sjstat
-This package contains the perl tool to print SLURM job state information.
+This package contains a Perl tool to print SLURM job state information.
 
 %package pam_slurm
 Summary:        PAM module for restricting access to compute nodes via SLURM
@@ -269,9 +267,9 @@ BuildRequires:  pam-devel
 
 %description pam_slurm
 This module restricts access to compute nodes in a cluster where the Simple
-Linux Utility for Resource Managment (SLURM) is in use.  Access is granted
+Linux Utility for Resource Managment (SLURM) is in use. Access is granted
 to root, any user with an SLURM-launched job currently running on the node,
-or any user who has allocated resources on the node according to the SLURM
+or any user who has allocated resources on the node according to the SLURM.
 
 %package lua
 Summary:        Lua API for SLURM
@@ -280,8 +278,8 @@ Requires:       slurm = %{version}
 BuildRequires:  lua-devel
 
 %description lua
-LUA API package for SLURM. This package includes the lua API to provide a
+This package includes the Lua API to provide an interface to SLURM
-helpful interface to SLURM through LUA.
+through Lua.
 
 %prep
 %setup -q -n %{name}-%{name}-%{ver_exp}